Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Narrative

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- Miss Gunda -

Miss Gunda moved into my house
      she will be living here for several years
      I do not know how long
      but she is warmly welcomed
      She is curious
      the eyes moves from room to room
      - spends a lot of time measuring every millimeter
      Things suddenly disappear ...
      yes even the charging cord for the phone
      We are looking high and low
      The issue is presented to Gunda
      As a thief in broad daylight
      of her good deeds, she admitted
      Although she is guilty
      I have found the best robot vacuum cleaner
      ... she does an fabulous work
      and still live here 







       29/06/2021
       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Jennifer Proxenos July 3, 2021 at 9:22 AM Oh how cute, i love this pic and the way you write about your new residential tenant. Really lovely Sunshine smile, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mystic Rose Rose June 30, 2021 at 5:27 PM Ah, I hear they work really nice, I still have an old fashioned broom stick, lol, I'm such a witch, :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 30, 2021 at 4:14 PM It's wonderful to have help with the housework. A charming picture and poem. Hugs, Evelyn :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2021 at 6:45 AM - Yes, and Miss Gunda I only paid her once ... and she's happy with it - Thank you very much for your comments, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 30, 2021 at 2:28 PM aww how cute is the pic and poem, son wants me to get one of the robotic vacuums I am not so sure:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2021 at 6:41 AM - I'm very pleased Jan, but I did not buy the one that was cheapest ... mine can vacuum and wash with a wet mop :) - Thumbs up :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley June 30, 2021 at 2:27 PM Beautiful dog and certainly a beautiful poem. I suspect that you both are blessed my friend. A fav.... God bless... Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2021 at 6:43 AM - Just a poem for fun Robert, but many thanks for your comments and fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis June 30, 2021 at 4:55 AM A narrative that has interwoven reality and fiction to such a degree that is difficult to tell them apart, dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:41 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph P. DiMino June 30, 2021 at 4:51 AM Don't blame you, Gunda is a clean sweap of love. Delightful! Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:40 AM - Robot love never rusts, Jo :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian June 30, 2021 at 4:35 AM I could do with something like your Gunda. It is not easy to keep the house tidy. Daily mopping floors is tiring. You gave life to her in your wonderful poem Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:39 AM - Especially not with children or pets ... in the house ... and I can do other things, which is not tiring :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar June 30, 2021 at 1:02 AM Robots have no conscience, so we must excuse her. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:35 AM - She's forgiven, Victor ... it was the owner's fault ... do not leave things on the floor - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel June 29, 2021 at 10:00 PM Great story told in style, Sunshine:) she'll sure be of immense help to you:) Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:34 AM - An excellent maid, Jo :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

L Milton Hankins June 29, 2021 at 7:36 PM Wonderful, Sunshine Smile! I have always wondered how effective they are. Uh, you seem sold on it. Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:33 AM - Mine is new this week, Milton ... I'm impressed ... can be recommended :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams June 29, 2021 at 7:25 PM what an adorable story... love the picture to go with your words, my three little ones are afraid of the vacuum and anything that moves... even a leaf in the wind... loved this, thanks for the laughs, hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:31 AM - It sounds like my two little ones ... barking of their own shadow ... but, Miss Gunda is very quiet and it goes just fine ... no barking and no one is afraid ... just curious :) - Thank you very much for visits and comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham June 29, 2021 at 3:39 PM A great invention Anne, certainly makes life easier. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:27 AM - She never says, no when I ask her :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus June 29, 2021 at 3:09 PM Miss Gunda has her good and bad points, very much like us people, Anne-Lise! Yours appears to be a harder worker than the one my daughter has....hers is always skiving in some quiet corner :) Regards & Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2021 at 10:26 AM - Miss Gunda is new this year ... maybe she has gone to a better school ... I hope so :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet June 29, 2021 at 2:40 PM I'm glad you are good, I enjoyed this fun write, your dog looks curious and serious, very nice picture. kindest regards Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2021 at 2:58 PM - This is not my private picture ... but a cute picture :) - Many thanks for your comments - glad you enjoy it, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bj Legros Kelley June 29, 2021 at 2:26 PM Fun poem! Mine is named Rosie, and my dog would never ride on it, but may hide from it! He finds Rosie to be rather creepy, but I like her very much, she's a great little helper! Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2021 at 2:56 PM - My dogs do not want to ride them either ... but, no barking just curious about Miss Gunda :) - Many thanks for your comments, BJ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit June 29, 2021 at 2:10 PM You told the story very creatively, Anne-Lise. That is a very handy tool to have around the house. Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2021 at 2:20 PM - Vacuuming is hard work ... I love miss Gunda :) - Many thanks for your friendly and lovely comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Smith June 29, 2021 at 2:04 PM Nice to know you are ok. Very entertaining piece and nice picture. Fondest regards David in NZ Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2021 at 2:22 PM - A perfect maid ... especially after my back surgery ... thank you very much, David ... nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)