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Miss Each Touch--Kib

She whispers deep of friendship's grant Yearning for warm caress, Alone with memories Her clan lost in enemy lines- Fresh dreams this world can't bless Or stroke a woman’s pain. Keep It Simple Contest Hosted by nette onclaud Aug 1, 2019 www,howmanysyllables.com noted “I think we miss that touch so much, that we crash into each other, just so we can feel something." Crash ,2004

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Date: 8/31/2019 9:26:00 PM
A unique interpretation of the quote, very nice.
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Date: 8/12/2019 4:05:00 PM
Very nice, banjo. I loved that quote as well but did not know how to do it the justice that you did, so I went with a different theme (and still did little justice to it!) congrats for your win
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Date: 8/11/2019 3:12:00 PM
a layered, poignant write with a punch in the end, banjo... congrats on your winning spot and thanks for being part of my contest!
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