Kp Nunez Poet Senryu

Misjudged

with beams in his eyes

          he points at the speck in mine - 

                       I keep my peace







*inspired by Matthew 7:5


23 July 2015
Senryu of Being Misjudged Contest
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial

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Eric Boddie August 4, 2015 at 3:33 PM eyes never lie....even though the mouth will try....and cause the windows to cry....because the truth is something to never deny....;)

Ralph Sergi July 28, 2015 at 7:34 AM Hi Kim: Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 28, 2015 at 12:24 AM Silence is the best tool to express many a times Kim! Fine work n win!Congrats!

Paul Callus July 26, 2015 at 4:55 PM Very wise of you, Kim ~ Sometimes silence is golden. With some people you just can't reason! Congratulations. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2015 at 8:31 AM It is so true, people who are judgemental do seem to be blinded to their own shortcomings.

Justin Bordner July 25, 2015 at 2:34 AM To be misjudged is common, to be true to your natural beauty is essential Kim...your beauty is real...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2015 at 11:16 PM wow, this is AMAZING. I love it. Congrats!!! Mine were not even real senryu, most of them.

Alexis Y. July 24, 2015 at 10:42 PM Kim, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos July 24, 2015 at 10:03 PM It's beautiful and full of wisdom! Congratulations, Kim on a wonderful well-deserved win! Pandita

Debbie Guzzi July 24, 2015 at 7:38 PM A lot left in the readers mind as it should be ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Constance La France July 24, 2015 at 5:14 PM Kim, beautifully penned 7 and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, let me tell you ...

Skat A July 24, 2015 at 4:48 PM Awesome win KIm

Julia Ward July 24, 2015 at 11:18 AM A point well-made in verse, Kim. Congratulations!

Eve Roper July 24, 2015 at 11:14 AM Love the impact in this verse congratulations on your win a seven hugs Eve

Afolabi Muideen July 24, 2015 at 9:40 AM Your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, a brilliant penned here and congrat. On your win............A.M.

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 8:17 AM Very good advice Kim - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lycia Harding July 24, 2015 at 8:11 AM Awesome Senryu, SpeckleEye... Uh, I mean, KIM. Ha! Congrats on your excellent win. xoxo

Wilma Neels July 24, 2015 at 7:54 AM This is an awesome write Kim :) I love it! especially your last line.. Hope your weekend will be a peaceful one :) hugs Wilma

Marvin G. Celestial July 24, 2015 at 7:42 AM Great win Kim! Congratz!

Laura Breidenthal July 24, 2015 at 6:23 AM I love this senryu inspired by a very intriguing bible verse. Great work! Always, Laura

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 23, 2015 at 10:31 PM Kim, I have such situations... I can relate to your senryu!!! this one of my bets in this contest.. ~Olive Eloisa =') Go Pinay!!!

Skat A July 23, 2015 at 7:10 PM This is a very lovely senryu. Kim, you keep your thoughts well. hope you win big with this one. Love SKAT

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2015 at 4:14 PM Good one that is Biblically based work..I enjoyed reading it..One Bible translate it as how can you get a tooth pick out of your brother's eye when you have a telephone pole in your eye?.Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis July 23, 2015 at 1:45 PM Excellently written and inspiring dear, Kim. If only all men and women could listen to this divine advice then we all could follow what he says at Matthew 5:48. where he calls us to be perfect as our father in heaven is perfect! God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2015 at 12:29 PM - A good advice to many of us - well and wisely written, dear Kim - Luck in contest!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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