Mishmash

Mishmash of thoughts, smashing potatoes, brightened with butter and lots of salt. Wherever was i, thoughtless, scattering, smishing and smattering what ought to be sound, fearless and earth shattering— a cause. Finally, the mishmash of thoughts, lined up, tear down the page… all the rage, totally engaged, a symphonic sage, a madman’s parade, a sword twisted— a poem wielded and waged. 9/18/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/24/2021 11:41:00 AM

All that mishmash of thought and emotion - elements of poetry - brought together splendidly Kim. Congratulations and blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2021 12:21:00 PM

Bless you too, Sam!

Constance La France

Date: 9/22/2021 2:46:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win in my M contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Constance! You run a fun bunch of contests.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2021 5:21:00 AM

I am having those mish mashed thoughts running through my head. I need to write something, anything to get them to stop. LOL..I like this one because I understand the concept. Your visits to my page boost my motivation. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you so much,

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/20/2021 2:49:00 PM

Okay ya got me with this one... makes total sense to me!!! Love from Canada!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 4:41:00 PM

Thank you…love your neighbor ~USA

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/20/2021 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative "Mishmash" write. With this past year and a half, I now know with smash potatoes feel like. Have a blessed day...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 2:34:00 PM

I know what ya, mean! Congrats!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2021 11:24:00 AM

I like how you twisted this into a fine poem my friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 2:33:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/20/2021 5:30:00 AM

Love it! Such wonderful Muse you have. The creative process, what goes into a poem, and what finally comes out -- sometimes not to us as important as the process itself. Fabulous use of words and imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 10:15:00 AM

Thank you for the encouragement. :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/20/2021 4:38:00 AM

great poetic thoughts crafted and created through an imagination that works miraculous poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 5:18:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jennifer!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2021 10:57:00 AM

I enjoy your many images showing us "mismash" throught your unique lines of poetry, Kim. Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2021 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2021 6:49:00 AM

A stable mind wrote this gem, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2021 7:31:00 PM

Glad you think so! Thank you, my friend! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/19/2021 2:55:00 AM

A mishmash that has created a heaven poetic symphony, dearest Kim! Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2021 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, my sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2021 2:26:00 AM

Loved your mishmash. Very original. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, Victor!

Brian Strand

Date: 9/19/2021 12:58:00 AM

The poem is not though Kim,neat idea

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, Brian :)

Running Wolves

Date: 9/18/2021 6:33:00 PM

Mishmashed potatoes of thought so fraught... sound like me every day bwahahahaha.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 6:53:00 PM

LOLLOL… ;)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/18/2021 6:04:00 PM

Really enjoyed your creative poem, Kim, although you said - it's a mishmash of thoughts. Mishmash makes things greatly interesting! Love ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 6:53:00 PM

Thank you, Mala! :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/18/2021 5:57:00 PM

Sometimes a mish mash of thoughts if strung along just so, can turn into a beautiful poem. Thanks for connecting the dots dear Kim, I enjoyed your creative pen tonight :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 6:52:00 PM

Thank you, dear Rose!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/18/2021 4:50:00 PM

Hello Kim ... I never thought of mashed potato and scrambled words resemble each other, until we as poets unscramble the words into fine poetry - thank you Kim - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Lindsay!

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/18/2021 1:32:00 PM

very nice! also love potatoes smashed with butter and salt :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2021 1:54:00 PM

Yes! :) lol