Misfortune

The blood streams down her chest witness Misfortune at her best The blood drips from her hair witness Misfortune without a care With pale white skin and ruby lips she'll suck you in trace your finger on bloodstained hips She'll drain you make you insane, you have to have her blood stained lips And she whispers, oh she whispers "Stay with me, just stay with me tonight" and you will While the blood goes Drip Drip Drip She's got you mesmerized Drop Drop Drop Not at all what you fantasized Drip Drop Drip She's your hell bent misery She's Misfortune, the best

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/11/2010 2:19:00 PM

love or lust? this poem made me hornier than a 3 headed sex demon with x-ray eyes and an x-rated mind. so evil erotic its pain is psychotic. i love to hate it and hate to love it. however i am uncontrollably infatuated with it. and i am a very discriminating critic of poetry.see you in your dreams

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/29/2010 9:33:00 AM

This is excellent. I sound like Poe. I like the imaginative topography of the piece. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2010 9:03:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2010 8:29:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii vacationing..luv..