Misery Laid Upon Soft Kindled Pine

Misery Laid Upon Soft Kindled Pine

The great Judge marks this hour at noon
 bright was this day in month of June.
A kinship richly felt with wooded glen
 saddened by the evil in hearts of men.

A fierce battle for land was fought
 death reigned supreme all for naught.
Blood splashed upon the limbs and leaves
 sorrow grips as each family grieves.

Dead feel not the heat of burning Sun
 no real glory felt by those that won. 
Misery laid upon softly kindled pine
 vultures fly waiting to come to dine! 

The carnage shook the stars on high
 time not given from sweet good-bye.
An unwelcome breeze stings this land
 all for naught, but evil in death's hand!

The great Judge marks this day of pain
 as tears fall ,victims lay in dashing rain.
A new day awaits the glory of hope sent
 forgiveness for the wasted lives spent.

June birds now flutter, renewing song
 lives so saddened move right on along.
Human spirit always racing to survive
 rarely embracing joy of just being alive.

Returning Sun shines upon life and all
 man's fate is to live then greatly fall.
Other journeys await in mystical realms
 many great ships, captains at the helms.

R.J. Lindley
09, 15, 1977

note: I have little memory of why I wrote this one
 back then. Perhaps a book I read, movie I watched 
or blues that wrapped me so often during that time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/18/2015 3:58:00 PM
I'm think this genre is a Ballad (as well as in Rhym form). You are most skilled at telling a story, epic or journey...no small feat. I see the date and know what it is to "back burner, slow cook" an idea. Sometimes takes a while to shake the words out of your pen! I wonder where my old poetry is? I'm so delighted you can Share yours! Amazing! E.Nau
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