Misconstrued Worship

Unload your appraised earnings
    in the collection baskets,
small price to pay 
    for holy water's kickback,
God thundered an indignant snort
    'pon gold filled prospered coffers      
within corporate excesses                  
   of enriched gaudy churches,
wondering when HIS word
  had begotten misconstrued
     in clergy's interpretations
      of powers' self-aggrandizement 
       and pontificating gratification;

whilst the huddled masses
    were starving midst the pews
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:44 PM
What a mouthful. Strong writing, Paloma. Emotional and to the point. Well said.
Salehi Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:24 AM
It is very much the truth... Nicely done.
Callus Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Some people donate with their mind, hoping to bribe their way into heaven; I am sure God won't take kindly to that! Others donate by heart and leave their good deeds to intervene for them. Regards // paul
Green Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Open for business, right here under this steeple. Deep Paloma, a touchy subject but so true. So, if money is the root of all evil, why do they expect it in the plate. I don't mind giving when the need arises but don't give me that look when it's not enough. Ok, I'll shut up now. Loved your poem.
Teagan Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 11:25 PM
"holy water's kickback" lol I like that. Pretty truthful poem here, I like it !
P  Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Ha that made me laugh, thanks, much appreciated Rebecca!
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Some things never change! Very poignant! A truthful write, 7/7
P  Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Thanks so much Rick, tis true, only the things we don't want changed, do.
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