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Mischief

We partake of a sonnet, it soars, it amazes It can take us on flights that inspire, upraise us A great sonnet's romantic and beauteous, you see It is written by Shelley or Donne, not by Stooges, the Three Lovely damsels, brave heroes ignite our true passion We all thrill to their exploits, as villains they smash in The pure rhyme, the bold reason, will cause us to swoon As we sip lemonade from a straw in a hammock in June... What is wrong with this portrait, you ask -- innocent It's idyllic and charming, for sure Heaven-sent Wings of angels are beating in time to its rhyme A melodious Harmony, Syncopated in time Well, I'm sorry to tell you the news, so sit down ~ There are no sonnets on Facebook, C'mon! September 16, 2018 "Sonnet" - whose last couplet does not actually rhyme and is rather disrespectful to the hallowed form, at best

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Date: 9/17/2018 11:48:00 AM
well done, gershon! very clever...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2018 6:19:00 PM
It takes clever to know clever, I always say...
Date: 9/17/2018 8:27:00 AM
I love it!! My best to you in the contest Wolfman ~ xomo!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thank you!!!!!!!!! ~ gw
Date: 9/17/2018 2:52:00 AM
Great sonnet, me and fb got divorced a long time back so I wouldn't know. Good luck. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2018 6:18:00 PM
Ha, ha. I wouldn't either. Never use it. ~ gw
Date: 9/16/2018 11:15:00 PM
I absolutely enjoyed your sonnet, my friend.. So awesome and wonderfully put together.. You really penned it perfectly.. Many blessings!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2018 11:54:00 PM
Robertina, your words are angel's wings to my spirits. Thank you, my dear friend. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 9/16/2018 10:48:00 PM
Love it. Good luck in the contest.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2018 11:54:00 PM
Appreciate your taking time to read and comment on this one, Jesse, especially considering how irregularly I've been posting lately. Best always, Gershon

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