Mischief

We partake of a sonnet, it soars, it amazes
It can take us on flights that inspire, upraise us
A great sonnet's romantic and beauteous, you see
It is written by Shelley or Donne, not by Stooges, the Three

Lovely damsels, brave heroes ignite our true passion
We all thrill to their exploits, as villains they smash in
The pure rhyme, the bold reason, will cause us to swoon
As we sip lemonade from a straw in a hammock in June...
 
What is wrong with this portrait, you ask -- innocent
It's idyllic and charming, for sure Heaven-sent
Wings of angels are beating in time to its rhyme 
A melodious Harmony, Syncopated in time   

Well, I'm sorry to tell you the news, so sit down
~ There are no sonnets on Facebook, C'mon!


           September 16, 2018
           "Sonnet" - whose last couplet does not actually rhyme
                           and is rather disrespectful to the hallowed form, at best
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bauer Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 11:48 AM
well done, gershon! very clever...
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 6:19 PM
It takes clever to know clever, I always say...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:27 AM
I love it!! My best to you in the contest Wolfman ~ xomo!
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thank you!!!!!!!!! ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Great sonnet, me and fb got divorced a long time back so I wouldn't know. Good luck. Tom
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Ha, ha. I wouldn't either. Never use it. ~ gw
B. Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:15 PM
I absolutely enjoyed your sonnet, my friend.. So awesome and wonderfully put together.. You really penned it perfectly.. Many blessings!!
Wolf Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Robertina, your words are angel's wings to my spirits. Thank you, my dear friend. Best wishes, Gershon
Rowe Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Love it. Good luck in the contest.
Wolf Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Appreciate your taking time to read and comment on this one, Jesse, especially considering how irregularly I've been posting lately. Best always, Gershon
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