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Mischief

Your
Mischief
Surpassed mine
Made me crazy
So hard and sublime
Do you think I am slow?
Made me angry, made me pout
When you whipped your big mischief out
Too bad you are my younger cousin
I cannot replace you by the dozen
You dear, are the mischief making queen
I have spit, stomped, stamped, yelled and screamed
No one tops your insane ways
I will try every day
I will sneak around
Until I top
Your mischief-
Ous ways
Yes!

This is formed like a Ninette, however, it is like an expanded ninette because instead of a ninette’s traditional 9 lines, I have turned this into nineteen lines. A traditional ninette starts with a small word,
Adding one syllable to each line until the fifth line, then it changes and decreases each line by one syllable.

Written 9/8/2018                 Nina Parmenter’s Contest       
                                          A Form of Mischief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/9/2018 4:58:00 PM
Very funny and creative caren:-) many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I had a lot of fun with it, I love the Ninette and the now eighteen-ette. Hahahaha!
Date: 10/4/2018 7:27:00 PM
Love your mischief in breaking the rules here, Caren! Well-done, and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/5/2018 3:16:00 AM
I am sort of a natural rule-breaker, Sandra.
Date: 10/4/2018 5:34:00 PM
VERY creative, Caren! CONGRATS! Janice
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/5/2018 3:16:00 AM
Thank you. I am trying to be a bit creative these days as my self-goal is ten poems each day, Janice.
Date: 9/8/2018 11:44:00 AM
Rule book? There was a rule book?! LOL ;D Fun poem, Caren!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/4/2018 4:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/8/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Rhona.
Date: 9/8/2018 10:58:00 AM
You have created a new form Caren, the rule book has been thrown out the window lol. Good luck. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/8/2018 1:27:00 PM
I do not believe in rules, I think we have all figured that out Tom.

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