Mirrors Are Meant To Be Broken

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Is there truly an image in these words? Look closely and you be the judge.

A miraculously flat prison A site of utter allocution Bearing witness to decision Beholding not of retribution Conversations with it an act of utter futility Covering does not instill a sense of humility Dimensionally free Damning still is thee Efficacy is still eluding Escapism found brooding Finally, a simple pathway to contrition Fracture this mirror, my final decision

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Anna Hopper

Date: 3/1/2023 3:08:00 PM

Ha! I love it! I wrote a poem pretty similar called mirror mirror.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/1/2023 3:20:00 PM

I will make it definite point of checking that one out! I'm truly honored that you have made so many comments on so many of my writings. I know for a fact I have not thanked Maureen enough for pointing you out to me. A deficiency that I will definitely remedy! Warmly A.S.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2023 12:26:00 PM

Wow! You really thought this out!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/28/2023 1:00:00 PM

Most of who I am hidden well below the surface. All of who I am carried out with definite purpose. I appreciate you noticing that! Regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/22/2023 11:10:00 AM

Deeo. It's something how we are cracked first before we ever crack the mirror. I liked the lines " Covering does not instill a sense of humility"-- well done!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/22/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you very much for the very interesting insight into this piece! I truly enjoy the way you have interpreted it. I am currently enjoying your work as well. Warmest regards A.S.