Anonomus Scorpio Poet Couplet

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Is there truly an image in these words? Look closely and you be the judge.

Mirrors Are Meant To Be Broken

A miraculously flat prison
A site of utter allocution
Bearing witness to decision
Beholding not of retribution
Conversations with it an act of utter futility
Covering does not instill a sense of humility
Dimensionally free 
Damning still is thee
Efficacy is still eluding
Escapism found brooding
Finally, a simple pathway to contrition
Fracture this mirror, my final decision

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Anna Hopper March 1, 2023 at 3:08 PM Ha! I love it! I wrote a poem pretty similar called mirror mirror. Anonomus Scorpio March 1, 2023 at 3:20 PM I will make it definite point of checking that one out! I'm truly honored that you have made so many comments on so many of my writings. I know for a fact I have not thanked Maureen enough for pointing you out to me. A deficiency that I will definitely remedy! Warmly A.S.

Kim Rodrigues February 28, 2023 at 12:26 PM Wow! You really thought this out! Anonomus Scorpio February 28, 2023 at 1:00 PM Most of who I am hidden well below the surface. All of who I am carried out with definite purpose. I appreciate you noticing that! Regards A.S.

Paige Hind February 22, 2023 at 11:10 AM Deeo. It's something how we are cracked first before we ever crack the mirror. I liked the lines " Covering does not instill a sense of humility"-- well done! Anonomus Scorpio February 22, 2023 at 11:15 AM Thank you very much for the very interesting insight into this piece! I truly enjoy the way you have interpreted it. I am currently enjoying your work as well. Warmest regards A.S.