Mirrorred Refrain-God Gave Us Love Freely

Smell the spring aroma and 
let it delight all your senses...
don't the softest roses bloom
on windless, sunniest days?


Let my slow fingers caress your lustrous hair,
feel the pleasant warmth of a lovely afternoon;
on windless, sunniest days...
don't the softest roses bloom?


Only the truest lovers can set the white moon ablaze,
as the passing stars shed more light on their faces;
don't the softest roses bloom
on windless, sunniest days?


God gave us love freely as the air we breath;
humans have turned it into lust and doom...
on windless, sunniest days
don't the softest roses bloom?

Entered in Jared Pickett's contest,"Mirrored Refrain"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful write. Caryl
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March 31, 2010 at 2:07 AM
Congratulations, Andrew on a well deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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March 30, 2010 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your success with this lovely work....Margaret
Pickett Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:49 PM
This was a great poem and deserved this HM.... Thank you, and congrats my friend.....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Jared's contest.. for this wonderful write from a wonderful poet.. enjoy your honor ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Lovely poem. congratulations on you winJ Joyce
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 1:02 PM
This is a beauty, and well deserving this win. Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest, Andrew! ~ Love, Carrie
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