Mirrored Thoughts -A Collaboration With Paul Callus

In another time and age 
we could have written a new page 
crossing paths on land or sea 
brushing cheeks with destiny. 
With youthful zest and joy 
our ardent quills employ 
to mix your ink with mine 
with passion so divine 
and then the words would flow 
to set each heart aglow. 

If our souls could sing and rhyme 
beyond the horizon of time 
to mirror our words with perfection 
with utmost sincerity and affection 
to bring distinct colors and shades 
we seal a bond that will not fade 
as we reach for eternity 
bathing in blissful affinity. 

Mirrored thoughts on a new page 
in another time and age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/16/2016 2:17:00 AM
enjoyed reading this collaboration, wonderful.....SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:08:00 AM
What could have been! ALWAYS a question of Symetry! Love the mirror images and the fun with rhyme back-and-fourth you two! Good one!
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Date: 5/9/2016 3:46:00 PM
This is truly a wonderful poem, you two certainly have a bond that will not fade...
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry,,,it's good to see you again...u bring smile on my face...cheers !!!!!!
Date: 5/4/2016 12:38:00 AM
It’s a Poetic Gem created by both of you dear friend Red. A heart touching beauty dwells in both parts of this excellent poem. I am making it a favorite poem of mine and thank you for your kind and precious comments on the translated Poem India. I will visit more of your beautiful poems soon. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:08:00 AM
Dear Ravindra, thank you for ur sweet comments ...I really appreciate from the bottom of my heart !
Date: 5/2/2016 8:24:00 AM
I thought I would give this beauty a second read. Yep, still amazing!!!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:09:00 AM
Hey Richard ! I am always on cloud 9 whenever u visit my poems...thank u for all the support...hugs red
Date: 4/28/2016 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration. Sorry for the delay in reading. I wasn't aware of the changes Poetry soup had made re notifications. Hugs Rick.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:10:00 AM
the soup never gives notifications these days.....strange ....glad that u liked my poem..hugs again
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Red Fiery
Date: 4/30/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Richard:)
Date: 4/28/2016 11:37:00 AM
Well , this is awesome combo...Red and Paul...Really loved this one 7
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:11:00 AM
Thank You Anand...ur very kind :)
Date: 4/27/2016 11:53:00 PM
very cool..i like it
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:12:00 AM
Thank u :)
Date: 4/27/2016 12:37:00 PM
Great collaboration, Red and Paul. A lovely rhythm to contemplate the many "ifs" of life ... in another time and age. Luckily there are less ifs today due to the Internet :) Excellent work.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:13:00 AM
Thank you my dear...I really enjoy reading ur poems too...hugs red
Date: 4/27/2016 10:40:00 AM
Wow, I'm in Love with this poem. Giving time and space to have it in another lifetime, is a very romantic forces. Red and Paul, I'm enjoying this collaboration. I've read many, and enjoy many, but this is the best one I've read. The connection between each poet is beautiful and flows through both sides. Always....Linda
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2016 4:45:00 PM
Thank you for reading and enjoying, Linda:) Charmed by your comments! hugs // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:15:00 AM
Linda, you are such a sweetheart :) I appreciate your kind words and I must say that I enjoyed collaborating with you too my dearest ...love Red
Date: 4/25/2016 10:17:00 AM
nice to see you active on the site once again! this is couplet rhyme, and it has smooth flow, nice collaborative work, well done you two :)
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:00:00 AM
What a marvelous collaboration and what a splendid result! Congratulation to both of you: Red Fiery and Paul, Paul and Red Fiery for offering us such a delight! A seven to both!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:39:00 PM
Dear Red Fiery Glad I stopped by your sight tonight love the read, and it's a great collaboration from both of you, very inspirational and well expressed, and thanks for visiting my site, glad you enjoyed my poetry also, take care cheri d.
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:48:00 AM
- A beautiful collaboration from you and Paul ! - hugs // Sun :)
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Red Fiery
Date: 4/24/2016 10:30:00 AM
Hugs to you
Date: 4/23/2016 10:35:00 PM
What a wonderful collab, it made me a wee bit sad, but this is beautiful poetry!! :)
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:17:00 AM
Thank you my dear:)
Date: 4/23/2016 10:07:00 PM
terrific collab between two tremendous poets
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/10/2016 12:15:00 AM
thank u Tim...I love ur romantic poems ...Hugs red
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Red Fiery
Date: 4/24/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Tim... :)
Date: 4/23/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Red, for sharing this poetic trip with me:) You are a lovely and easy to work with person. It's been a pleasure to mix ink with you:) hugs // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 4/24/2016 10:28:00 AM
Paul, you have inspired me a lot.. Thank you for always supporting me nd my work.. I really ienjoyed collaborating with you... Hugs to you...
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