Mirrored Reflections

Imagine someone finished all your thoughts
and never failed to share your point of view.
Would your reflection really be your own
if one you mirrored also mirrored you?

I think it would be nice to be real close
to someone else, but picture him your clone. . . 
If one you mirrored also mirrored you,
would your reflection really be your own?

I saw a show about a pair of twins.
They’ve stayed the same in all they say and do.
Would your reflection really be your own
if one you mirrored also mirrored you?

What mystery or fun in partnerships
if there were always everything foreknown?
If one you mirrored also mirrored you,
would your reflection really be your own?

If bonds of love were colors, could they thrive
if they remained the one same constant hue?
Would your reflection really be your own
if one you mirrored also mirrored you?

If you reflected someone flesh and soul. . . 
Together would you not still be alone?
If one you mirrored also mirrored you,
would your reflection really be your own?

I would not like to know my whole sweet life
were being lived by not just one, but two!
Would your reflection really be your own
if one you mirrored also mirrored you?


For the Mirror Poetry Contest of Nathan A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:04 AM
CONGRATS!! in the mirror contest.... Linda
Jordan Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Very nice work, and very deserving of the win. You do keep busy... Jack
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Awesome write. It certainly evokes thoughts. Congratulations on your outstanding win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Andrea, congrats in Nathan's MIRROR contest............... have yourself a sweet day............ SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Reads like a winner..Interesting way that you mixed two forms to make it your own..I like the repeat lines within it..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your place of honor..Sara
Maverick Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Great result in the top spot here Andrea, A most thought provoking piece..'
Liwayway Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:27 AM
fantastic write friend Andrea....so very creative..Congratulations on your grand win!!! cheers!! :) hugs, maria
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I have always pondered the kinship of twins......and if that is a difficult role, or one that is blessed...... coming closest to the feelings of your poem, is that concept. My daughter-in-law happens to be a twin....and it is indeed as if she were cloned at times. I almost envy her being able to see "herself" more clearly. Great poem, Andrea. Congrats!!!
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 2:29 AM
They flee into eternity; these images my mirror holds of me - Diminishing into nothingness - these images my mirror holds of me..... This is a great bit of writing, Andrea. Your creative wisdom cannot be reflected by mere silver and glass, leaving nothing to offer you but congratulations .... Jake
Ryerson Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 6:38 PM
It misses the subject completely, and I don't know why, but this poem makes me think of 'The Dance' by Garth Brooks...Great wisdom and insight here my friend and congrats of course - Tim
D. Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Congrats! Nate
Onclaud Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 12:13 AM
why do you whoooot me always, hearte, lol!! a beuauty, indeed!! CONGRATS for the high win! :) huggs
Onclaud Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 12:12 AM
why do you whoooot me always, hetarie, lol!! a beuauty, indeed!! CONGRATS for the high win! :) huggs
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Something to think about yes? Two headmistresses LOL, Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Neels Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Wow a real gem Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win, love Wilma
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Wow....another beauty, Andrea! It is not only sonnets that you write so supremely!!Congrats!!
Mehta Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Andrea
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Andrea. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Lovely write. Many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
George   Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:48 AM
And you are truly one of a kind, dear Andrea. Your poetic talent is amazing. Many congrats on your WIN. Love, Lainie
Ditshwele Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Hi Drea! congrats on your second place win.
Mannan Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 9:11 PM
Andrea Wow, i absolutely loved this. My fav for sure. Many congrats love.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my contest .. appreciate your constant support luv..
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Congrats on the win. A well penned poem
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