Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"mirrored Answers"

Mirrored reflections show  the real view...
We sway through our decisions pushing blame to who...
Look deep in your self and the reasons may rise...
Not left out in the rain but still feel what passed by...
A crutch for you till your demons left in the air...
Nothing left for me to do, your reasons not shared...
Maybe a tad bit used but I still sleep in peace...
Should of known once I was done these feeling would seize...
A chapter closed , the credits pass...
In and out you came , sad it went to fast...



Written by Michael J. Falotico on July 23rd 20010



Why oh Why? contest Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet

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Debbie Guzzi October 30, 2010 at 5:21 PM Deep one, layered like i like them, lots to reflect on! Congrad's on your win. Light 7 Love (PS thanks for always giving me such nice comments!)

Sara Kendrick October 19, 2010 at 5:19 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest..Sara

Brandee Augustus October 15, 2010 at 2:22 PM Whatever the motivation for this poem and the many interpretations you can make, I like the passion I see in each line. This is a very impactful poem. Congratulations on getting a win with this.

Francine Roberts October 9, 2010 at 2:22 PM congrats on your win in the contest Michael

James Fraser October 9, 2010 at 7:09 AM Many congratulations Michael on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown October 8, 2010 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your win Michael. Love,Carol

Wilma Neels October 8, 2010 at 10:12 AM Michael congrats on your win in Constance's contest with this introspective write. Hope your weekend will be an awesome one ;) love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta October 8, 2010 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Michael

Constance La France October 8, 2010 at 4:06 AM Congratulations, Michael, on your placement in my contest, Why Oh Why ~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 7, 2010 at 11:57 PM Congrats my White Knight on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry .. words always so touching my friend.. enjoy your sweet victory this happy weekend with luv..

Audrey Haick October 7, 2010 at 10:50 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michael...I love this. Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown July 23, 2010 at 7:27 AM I enjoyed reading your fantastic poetry this morning Michael. I will be away for the weekend and will be back to read Monday. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol