Jajosh Ongado Poet Rhyme

Mirror of Secrets

His glass-stained eyes saw things he knew
That framed a past when years withdrew
From indiscretions of a town---
Mirrored in youth’s flashes, rundown
By secrets kept in a house where he loved and grew.


Contest for Reflections of A Florette
31 Aug 2014
Jajosh Ongado

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Nette Onclaud September 14, 2014 at 10:14 PM the mystery of it all, so powerfully composed, jajosh.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and huggs

John Lawless September 14, 2014 at 8:05 AM "That framed a past when years withdrew" Brilliant!!! And the dilemma then becomes how to keep them from "framing" the future. Well done.

Paul Callus September 14, 2014 at 4:37 AM This is another unique take on the mirror theme. The secrets give it a deeper mysterious feel. Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 14, 2014 at 1:10 AM Congrats on ur winning wonderful write Jajosh !

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2014 at 10:30 PM Congratulations on a great win, Jajosi

Pandita Sietesantos September 13, 2014 at 9:46 PM Congratulations, Jajosh on your wonderful win! Excellent piece! Pandita

Jan Allison September 13, 2014 at 6:33 PM I sometimes wish the mirror could talk and reveal secrets - a great write many congrats. hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans September 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM I really enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations Jajosh

Casarah Nance September 1, 2014 at 2:24 PM Oh this was enjoyable to read, you got the form perfect and the story unique, I do like your entry, best of luck :)

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2014 at 12:15 PM I hope you do well in the contest and enjoyed your poem. Happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina