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Mirror, Mirror: Dechnad-1

When you sit down to write, and it seems a bit forced When the rhyme pairs are matching, but somewhat divorced When the wellspring has dried up right there at the source Just relax - she’ll return to you all in due course When that stanza’s like swallowing a bitter pill When you’re thinking in verbs and nouns, put down that quill Stop playing such a selfish war inside your head And consider that she’s needing feeding instead Just remember, she’s here to bring joy, not confuse And recall what you did before sing to your muse So go dance with your daughter or run with your son Your spirits start soaring, and she then joins the fun And since these things just never do happen to you Writing witty little poems shows ‘em that, too! ---------- a Dechnad Cummaisc, Irish quatrains (8/4a/8b/4ba) (lines 2 and 4 end rhymes, 3's end rhymes with syllable 2 or 3 of line 4). Much less restrictive than its big sister, the Dechnad Mor https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/dechnad-cummaisc-poetic-forms

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Date: 10/17/2022 11:57:00 AM
This is funny "When you’re thinking in verbs and nouns, put down that quill"
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Date: 10/17/2022 8:24:00 AM
I’m honestly blown away by your encyclopaedia like mind, and knowledge of poetry forms Jeff, and this one is no exception, so expertly crafted with or without the help of a muse, have you a masters degree in literature, or just a regular genius, exceptional work, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/17/2022 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up Jeff, I shall check out that link,, the math major and programmer make perfect sense, you have a truly gifted analytical mind, reflects throughout your poetry, as they say over this side of the pond you’re certainly no plonker, cheers David
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/17/2022 8:38:00 AM
Also, I recently stumbled across this, which has been a real treasure-trove of new forms, many not found under our site's list: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/list-of-50-poetic-forms-for-poets (now 168)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/17/2022 8:33:00 AM
Hey David, you're entirely too kind! I'm a math major, but a programmer by craft. I'd written perhaps 150 poems over a 10 year period, and retired last August. In January of this year, I joined PoetrySoup, and very quickly ran into Milt Hankins, who encouraged me to try writing every form I could. I took his words to heart, and have really, really enjoyed learning new ones.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/17/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for the read and the gracious comments!

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