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Miriam

My sister Miriam lights the Sabbath flame maiden is she with tumbled hair uncovered. She strikes the match and prays for G-d's acclaim. Like Sara in the tent she lights the flame pristine hands in front of two eyes hovered. My sister Miriam lights the Sabbath flame At sunset each flickering flame frames a wish for communion, peace discovered, she strikes the match and prays for G-d's acclaim. The table is set, the family exclaim, the challah's cut, the shofar uncovered. My sister Miriam lights the Sabbath flame. May peace and tranquility ever reign from sunset to sunrise rediscovered, she strikes the match and prays for G-d's acclaim. This great mitzvah is sister Miriam's aim since the dawn of time this act's recovered. My sister Miriam lights the Sabbath flame. She strikes the match and prays for G-d's acclaim. Dedicated to my baby sister Miriam who protects and serves. http://www.womeninthebible.net/1.7.Miriam.htm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/19/2012 9:55:00 PM
Just saw this. Really, really nice. Villanells turn out so nice when done right. Your sis will be proud.
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Date: 2/19/2012 10:44:00 AM
Lovely dedication to a brave lassie Debbie. From your words you can tell how proud you are. Have a most lovely Sunday - James xxx
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Date: 2/19/2012 5:53:00 AM
Soooo sweet and loving poem dedicated to yours sister Miriam,Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/19/2012 5:57:00 AM
My beautiful sister as well as being the youngest in our family is a police officer!
Date: 2/18/2012 8:07:00 PM
This is so lovely Debbiel. The villanelle is a beautiful form. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/18/2012 5:40:00 PM
Nice poem,Fine description.This is good and thanks for sharing......great dedication..
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