Mirage: Tapestry of the Sand
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*2nd Place*
F Form - Free Verse (Written my way)
Poetic Form: Free Verse
Inspired: 2024 July 24
Contest Judged: 2024 August 06
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Image:Hourglass in the desert
"The hourglass parts paternally and maternally with life flowing in between," ... by The Poet.
granules enigmatic essences yields the life source
epitomized in the desert aglow ...
granulites a rose an aspiring hope
as maternal eyes glides afloat
calming dust devils common there ...
desert air steads an apparition of a wife
her vision that maketh every dreamer dreaming
cometh true ...
the sun befell upon my lap like tumbleweeds brushing alongside my legs
forever drifting, turning, tumbling, and tumbling along
until disturbing utterance of confusion ...
yakety, yakety, yak it's incessant and
I'm all alone so what am I to do now
oh, there's his milk bottle ...
I was in a coarse place sliding down a course all glassey
it was fun there I don't like it here, hey, what was that
where'd it go, sounds goo-goo now ga-ga
I will make sounds too, wah, wah, wah ...
that's alright I'll grab his bottle my dear ...
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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