Mirage

In the vast cyber desert
 Where people thirst for truth
 I stumbled on a website 
 Called the Poetry Soup
 Welcome to the Poetry Soup
 The cyber voices said
 Was it an oasis?
 Or was it all in my head

 So I tapped on the keyboard
 And i began to write
 My words were illuminating
 I was a warrior of light
 But the desert sun got too hot
 And my words began to burn
 So I tapped 'escape' on the keyboard
 But the site would always return

 So I asked the cyber captain
 To program my release
 He just said "That's not what we believe
 We are only programmed to receive
 You can logout any time you please
 But you can never leave!"
                    ----
 Inspired by the song Hotel California by the Eagles
 And by Becca's Blog

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/12/2016 12:23:00 PM
- The song and your poem brings many memories of my teenage years (Hotel California by the Eagles) - Wonderful written, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:13:00 AM
Great interpretation of that song Joseph, poetic thirst quenched! :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 6:24:00 AM
I love that song Hotel California by Eagles. Very thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing it.
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