Miraculous Birth

Among Bethlehem’s crowded dwellings
existed few good hearted innkeepers.
Joseph, knowing lovely Mary needed only privacy,
quietly rented stables
to unfold
Virgin’s wonderful Xmas yield
zealously
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Okubo Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 9:51 AM
Excellent ABC. Love it. Well done.Thanks for you kind comments on my poems.
Burton Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 10:39 PM
is it safe to say we already know the story or what, did you know the most easy form of poetry is writing about christ or god period, come on expand your mind try the world and its darkness. SMILE
Mckenzie Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:56 PM
Wonderful discription of Christmas as it should be told! Interesting form too! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 12:50 PM
Show off! ~lol~ Just teasing! So amazed as once again you do wonders with this difficult form. Seriously awesome. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 12:43 PM
Using the alphabet in this glorious way....what a wonderful poem! Great job, Nigel!! ~ Love, Carrie
Torres Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 11:17 AM
Nigel this was very touching and beautiful your love for Christ shines my dear friend. Loved this very warm and tender. Michael Torres
Gorelick Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 10:40 AM
You did it again..this seems so difficult but reads sos easily like it just rolled off your tongue. BG
Thomas Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 9:53 AM
Amazing seasonal ABC! I also love the first line. Wonderful poem! ~Juliane
Higgins Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 9:32 AM
Well done on this piece Nigel. I love the first line because it sets the mood for the rest of the read forme. It drew me and kept me focused. Beautiful job!
Christian Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 8:54 AM
oh so cool, this is a great write about our Lords' birth, god bless from diane
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