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Miracle Number Won

MADD mothers were doing just fine
Until Jesus made water wine
After a wedding
Wine smooths the bedding
Whilst organs arouse the divine

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Valsa George

August 12, 2022 at 9:16 PM

With too much of wine 'organs ' will go to sleep..... ! On the wedding day, it will be sad...!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 19, 2021 at 1:16 PM

Love the play on words with "organs," Rico. My hubby drank too much at the wedding and fell asleep on our wedding night :) Enjoyed! Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf

March 15, 2021 at 4:34 PM

This poem does more than merely arouse one's curiosity, Rico! You think it works better than Viagra?! lol. :) gw

Rico Leffanta

March 16, 2021 at 11:14 AM

Does Viagra really work, or is it just a sugar pill supported by a belief system? Aloha! Rico

Lindsay Laurie

March 14, 2021 at 4:56 PM

Hello Rico … you are darn good at writing limericks Rico. There’s always a message there - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta

March 15, 2021 at 11:28 AM

Compliments from an expert are always appreciated! Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire

March 14, 2021 at 2:11 PM

LOL MADD does seem to be making a difference in the lives of young people. That little bit of wine given at mass isn't even enough to affect me, a non-drinker. It doesn't take much for a teen's organs to "arouse." Funny poem, my friend!

Rico Leffanta

March 15, 2021 at 11:27 AM

But the wedding wine bill has soared over the years ....Aloha! Rico