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Miracle Number Won

MADD mothers were doing just fine Until Jesus made water wine After a wedding Wine smooths the bedding Whilst organs arouse the divine

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Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 9:16:00 PM

With too much of wine 'organs ' will go to sleep..... ! On the wedding day, it will be sad...!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2021 1:16:00 PM

Love the play on words with "organs," Rico. My hubby drank too much at the wedding and fell asleep on our wedding night :) Enjoyed! Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2021 4:34:00 PM

This poem does more than merely arouse one's curiosity, Rico! You think it works better than Viagra?! lol. :) gw

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/16/2021 11:14:00 AM

Does Viagra really work, or is it just a sugar pill supported by a belief system? Aloha! Rico

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/14/2021 4:56:00 PM

Hello Rico … you are darn good at writing limericks Rico. There’s always a message there - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/15/2021 11:28:00 AM

Compliments from an expert are always appreciated! Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2021 2:11:00 PM

LOL MADD does seem to be making a difference in the lives of young people. That little bit of wine given at mass isn't even enough to affect me, a non-drinker. It doesn't take much for a teen's organs to "arouse." Funny poem, my friend!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/15/2021 11:27:00 AM

But the wedding wine bill has soared over the years ....Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2021 12:31:00 PM

omg that final line had me in hysterics and i do love your clever titles Rico lol:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/15/2021 11:26:00 AM

Happy to have moved you to the sublime? Aloha! Rico