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Minute of Bliss

Written: April 13, 2025, for contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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May the beauty of life pour down over me,
embrace me, let nature sway and play,
to permeate my soul, uplifting my spirit,
to soar out of my body, if only for a minute.

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Howard Kerr

August 31, 2026 at 3:55 PM

Concise, creative, crystal clear message embracing a popular aspiration which a minute of bliss is. Flawless presentation of your poetic theme. Imaginitive word brush strokes.🔥🔥✨⭐ Amazing, Sotto H

Valsa George

April 15, 2025 at 5:23 AM

Such celestial moments may be very rare. But to slip into such fleeting interludes is sheer bliss. It will be a time when soul flies out of the bondage of the ribcage! Simply awesome.

Frank Sheehan

April 14, 2025 at 12:42 PM

Great write. Nice rhythm and flow. Very inspirational. Powerful pen. Enjoyed.

Ink Empress

April 14, 2025 at 11:33 AM

Amen to that, i wish the same for you and everyone, may the beauty of life be all we taste and feel as life can sometimes overwhelming! A very soothing and comforting prayer so beautiful woven and delivered in few words dr sotto! Well done! I love especially “to permeate my soul, uplifting my spirit, to soar out of my body, if only for a minute.” So heartfelt! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always