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Minute of Bliss

Written: April 13, 2025, for contest sponsored by Line Gauthier ***************** May the beauty of life pour down over me, embrace me, let nature sway and play, to permeate my soul, uplifting my spirit, to soar out of my body, if only for a minute.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/15/2025 5:23:00 AM

Such celestial moments may be very rare. But to slip into such fleeting interludes is sheer bliss. It will be a time when soul flies out of the bondage of the ribcage! Simply awesome.

Frank Sheehan

Date: 4/14/2025 12:42:00 PM

Great write. Nice rhythm and flow. Very inspirational. Powerful pen. Enjoyed.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/14/2025 11:33:00 AM

Amen to that, i wish the same for you and everyone, may the beauty of life be all we taste and feel as life can sometimes overwhelming! A very soothing and comforting prayer so beautiful woven and delivered in few words dr sotto! Well done! I love especially “to permeate my soul, uplifting my spirit, to soar out of my body, if only for a minute.” So heartfelt! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always

Jay Narain

Date: 4/14/2025 10:43:00 AM

Nice prayer. If you believe in it, it will come true.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/14/2025 3:22:00 AM

A prayer I need to recite everyday. Occasionally I don't achieve anything but mediocrity.