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Minus Fifty Pounds

Looked in the mirror and what did I see A very svelte image but only half of me Minus fifty pounds Joyous happy sounds Emanate from my bottom as I run for a pee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/4/2017 2:41:00 PM
Ha, Ha, Ha.Very funny. // Barry
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/4/2017 2:44:00 PM
Happy as a pig in poop!!!. Jack
Date: 11/4/2017 12:57:00 PM
Hahaha...Great ending
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/4/2017 1:06:00 PM
And I ain't done yet!!!
Date: 11/4/2017 8:41:00 AM
You must have hit the magic number//200 give or take a plumber//my congrats/former fats//Your prize? I'm even dumber! PEE ON SHADOW JACK!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
YUP!!! 200 on the verge of breaking the barrier!!! FEELS FANTASTIC!!! Just a shadow of my former self!!! YEE HAW!!!
Date: 11/4/2017 8:10:00 AM
*Giggles* <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/4/2017 8:28:00 AM
Like a new man!!!! LOVESIES JACK xxx

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