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Minus Fifty Pounds

Looked in the mirror and what did I see
A very svelte image but only half of me
Minus fifty pounds
Joyous happy sounds
Emanate from my bottom as I run for a pee

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2017

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Barry Stebbings

November 4, 2017 at 2:41 PM

Ha, Ha, Ha.Very funny. // Barry

November 4, 2017 at 2:44 PM

Happy as a pig in poop!!!. Jack

November 4, 2017 at 12:57 PM

Hahaha...Great ending

November 4, 2017 at 1:06 PM

And I ain't done yet!!!

November 4, 2017 at 8:41 AM

You must have hit the magic number//200 give or take a plumber//my congrats/former fats//Your prize? I'm even dumber! PEE ON SHADOW JACK!!!

November 4, 2017 at 8:47 AM

YUP!!! 200 on the verge of breaking the barrier!!! FEELS FANTASTIC!!! Just a shadow of my former self!!! YEE HAW!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 4, 2017 at 8:10 AM

*Giggles* <3

November 4, 2017 at 8:28 AM

Like a new man!!!! LOVESIES JACK xxx

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