Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Minuanetta- Your Love Is Like a Reverie

Your LOVE is like an adoring reverie,
               like pebbles on a shore you surface me-
Like a tide in the sand you set me free,
     you bring healing to this heart’s TRIBUTARY.
You flow through me like a tender memory. 

       I need you like a babbling brook of infatuation, 
in REVERENCE to the stream of our veneration-
              You bring a watercourse of life’s inspiration 
and ease with a sincere CURRENT of alleviation. 

           There’s a deluge running through my veins, 
 now only a waterway of LOYALTY remains-
             You are mother nature’s beauty my heart contains. 

      We share a fluvial flow of a lover’s CONNECTION,
             an aqueous cascade showering me with affection. 

The slightest touch of your hand sends a piety of EMOTION.

           This flux in motion has caused such flattery, 
                       making me so GRATEFUL for your beloved creation-
               Each time you caress me my soul obtains
                     a meandering stream of pure perfection. 
                                      For your love is like a reverie of DEVOTION. 




January 27th, 2018

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Subimal Sinha-Roy April 30, 2018 at 1:57 AM Congratulations, Laura on your win. Beautifully flowing piece.

Natasha Turner April 29, 2018 at 3:10 PM Beautiful :)

Susan Gentry April 29, 2018 at 2:20 PM Congratulations on your placement win. I enjoyed reading this, rhythm and rhyme were awesome. An amazing minuanetta about love. :)

Gregory Richard Barden April 29, 2018 at 2:05 PM This is so romantic and charming, with exquisite phrasing and metaphor, Luloo, and I adore the water connection for your chremamorphism. You commanded the form AND the rhyme like you'd always known it, and created such a lovely story with it - just LOVE this one! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)

Line Gauthier April 29, 2018 at 8:06 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 29, 2018 at 12:58 AM Congratulations, Laura on your win. Nicely flowing poem of heart.

Eve Roper March 11, 2018 at 7:55 PM Lovely write, Laura, the waterways to love ; luck in the contest Hugs

Frederic Parker January 29, 2018 at 2:29 PM Well done Laura, I know for me it wasn't easy to have a collection of sentences rhyme in order, you seem to have done it well...good luck

Line Gauthier January 27, 2018 at 9:03 PM Very romantic, Laura. GL

Sunlite Wanter January 27, 2018 at 5:57 PM Really nice, Laura. You can almost hear a tinkling classical piano.

Jan Allison January 27, 2018 at 2:55 PM I have no idea where to start with this contest LuLoo - your lines flow so beautifully good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith January 27, 2018 at 1:48 PM Your love is like a waterfall LuLoo, good going and best wishes...