Minuanetta-Black Hole Beauty

Black Hole Beauty Stay calm my beating heart for you will enter the vastness of the void Consumed by a blackened bestial bliss that the demons have deployed She comes amidst the narcissistic night devouring love like a humanoid A conqueror of time and space the light before her shall be destroyed All hale the Queen of darkness a Shiva diva the adumbrative android In context to the stars mitotic moons hearts of gold in dungeons dwell Pandemic planets pray to avoid clutches of her sadomasochistic spell Asteroids display her black heart of doom unleashed from dormant hell With tentacles wide dominating she breaks through her shattered shell Her bowing beauty entraps the universe and spews out a nebulous dust The eclipse of my soul an obsession of obscurity in her crushing of crust Into the dimness of twilight the shadows like serpents dance in disgust Once a benevolent beauty now a sanctified seductress seducing surreal Roaming in dimensional drifts in preparation for her next indulging meal In her amorant annihilation death is a savior of her effulgent extinction A terminator of trust all effervescent emotions have been employed Rambunctious radiation the ringing of her electromagnetic bell For within a supernova stellar mass lacking in leisured lust You comply and conform with a begging kneel Ruler of hearts with infinite infliction. '...this poem is in reference to people who have had or have and suffer from a narcissistic personality disorder...quite the experience...I wish them all well...' March.21.2018 Minuanetta Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden
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Date: 2/12/2019 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win - I enjoyed the ride :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:26:00 PM
Ditto Gregory word for word, amazing, congratulations on your podium placement, Mick
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:15:00 PM
Amazing metaphors, ^WW^! Congratulations! Your poem is so worthy of the fine podium placement! Sandra :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:06:00 PM
This was extraordinary in its thoughtful and descriptive content, WW, and just plain took a lot of acumen and elbow-grease - loved it! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! From my experience people with this disorder have other disorders that are treatable but rarely want treatment. The people around them suffer. Other than that, you have written an amazing emotive minuanetta.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 8:11:00 AM
Oh I wanted to say it is an educational write also. Had to look up a couple of words. You are brilliant with terminology!
Date: 4/29/2018 7:47:00 AM
A fabulous read. Congrats on your silver medal win, WW.
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:25:00 PM
Narcissists victimize those around them just by just being who they are, and they won’t change. That statement may seem extreme, until you listen to the stories of those who have been victimized by a narcissist. Then you realize just how toxic relationships with these individuals can be. I didn't write that I googled it, but I have met a few narcissistic people in my time and yes, funny how one ends up feeling bad with themselves, when all they were trying to do was help.Some of your lines here are out of this world my dear friend, and I see its for a contest,good luck on this excellent write....Maria
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/22/2018 10:28:00 PM
Oh and its a definite fave....Maria
Date: 3/22/2018 9:29:00 AM
I know a few people like this, they seem to target empaths, but I can see from a mile away... Great poem WW... Hope you are well..
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:39:00 AM
So true my Silent friend...so true...and thank you for the comment...I'm doing a bit better my friend...unfortunately I know such a person and it is extremely difficult to get them help...for they believe you have the problem...stay in the light...^WW^
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