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On a night sable, my door hastily thrown abducted in a rush by one-eyed loonies, neon- yellow skin reflecting oval heads whisking me in a shuttle, circling far away. Taken to a realm where their master reigned, impish a jabber, worse than 'Nanu, Nanu ,' stuttering words, a version of 'Yabba daba doo!' until minions got enticed by my own Beyonce tune. While I hummed some more, they gathered in peace their nimble fingers reading my human mind. But as time was running out for an escape, everyone heard the despotic lord, groaning aloud dressed in a chrome-like armor, totally grim ordering the puppets, his slaves for my deadly fall. Instead, all minions clobbered this evil one as the land of orbit grew warm in sunset's kiss, happy loonies practicing new lyrics, Beyonce's song. 2/26/2016 Minions Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 2/28/2016 5:57:00 PM
Great write, Nette,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/28/2016 12:33:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:30:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2016 6:58:00 AM
What a fertile imagination you have. I was captivated by your use of expressions from the Flintstones and Mork-Mindy! Let those minions sing!
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Date: 2/26/2016 5:27:00 AM
Goodness, this could be an interesting storyline for the next minion movie! I can imagine those characters singing with Beyonce. Really a creative poem way out of what's ordinary!
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:07:00 AM
- An amazing poem, Nette - Luck in contest ! - Happy Friday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2016 2:56:00 AM
Excellent composition ! You chose a difficult topic..( I can't write like you ). This is seriously brilliant...! Well done!
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:04:00 AM
Their voices are squeaky-- no wonder minions wanted to tune in to a new beat. Outrageously funny poem!
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