Gabby Sabre Poet Free verse

Minimalist--Closed Path

Labyrinthine mind jams  along mazes
Searching restlessly for inner fortitude;
Till  amaranth weeds point eastward--
Reams clearing passage  through sunrise
To unveil enlightenment—an epiphany!



For Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Minimalist Form--- dated Oct 16, 2O17

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Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2017 at 8:54 PM wow, I love this, Gabby. The Close Path entries seem so profound!! Congrats for the win.

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 5:46 PM Gabby , congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2017 at 5:23 PM you are a trailblazer--so extraordinary in its treatment of the subject... warm congrats, gabby, and thanks for gracing my contest...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 15, 2017 at 3:18 PM Nice! Love what you've done with "the closed path", I believe the most challenging :) my best to you for the contest Gabby xomo