Minimal Ink

Well chosen
                                    a thousand pictures
                                        turn on a word








12/16/18

Composed for
Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer's
Minimalism Poetry Contest

Brian Strand's
May 2019 Premier 5
4th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 5:25 PM
VERY nice. Well done for the win, Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Thank you Andrea! I'm thrilled, this didn't place I the contest it was written for ;) xomo!
Awtry Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Whoa! This should be the title and cover of your poetry book! Congratulations!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Your timing is incredible, was bandying about "feminism is a rubber chicken" as a title. Thank you! ;)))) xomo!
Ashley Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 7:54 PM
The depth and breadth of your potent brevity and your uncanny ability to turn a phrase amazes me, Mo. You inspire me. Congratulations on your excellent win, my lovely. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan <3
Ashley Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 9:34 AM
Lol! Love and mumbles.. :)) that’s so cute, Mo <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:52 AM
You humble me keyless <3 love and mumbles, thank You! Hugs xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Awesome, Maureen. Love it. Congrats on your win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Line! :) hugs and sunshine xomo
Chan Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Love how you turned a cliche on its head so economically. You're the High Priestess of minimalism, Maureen :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Tee hee ;) Thank you my friend! Happy New Year hugs xomo!
Faulkner Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Very Zen, sparse words can have great impact!
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December 20, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Highest compliment :) Thank you Michelle! xomo
Cornish Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 3:05 PM
again, would be better Haiku than most pen-----trying
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Thank you again <3
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Love the double meaning here. It turned me on. (Careful there!) Best always, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Blushin' giggles ;) thank you Wolf Man! xomo
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Clever...
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December 17, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thankya x
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:58 PM
One look, her memory, forever etched in my mind
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:45 AM
One indelible word
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:28 PM
One thinks they must comb through a long-winded poem but instead I say take the time to ponder the few words in a ku. Usually more than one thing being said. Like a skewer spinning over a campfire, we can view from many sides. Happy Holidays...doo doo doo doo! <3 Kim
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Too much wind and the wrong blown away ;) well said! Happy Holidays to you too <3 xomo
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Well chosen and well said..your trademark minimalist way! Best for a TOP win, Maureen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Vijay :))) xomo!
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