Newton Ranaweera Poet Rhyme

Minichu: Savory Cheese

Heart weds mind when writing
Minichu, a wondrous form of poetic piece.
Ah, biting 

Lips, stroking brow, 
I nibble this savory cheese,
And Wow!  

I chime,
And, mind at ease,
Rhyme.  

Heart weds mind when writing;
I nibble this savory cheese —
Rhyme. 


Oct. 18, 2020 
Let's Minichu on writing or not writing a Minichu Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 6:23 AM Cute one Newton! Congratulations on the win! Linda Newton Ranaweera October 31, 2020 at 1:52 PM Thank you so much, Linda, for your lovely comment!!

Mohan Chutani October 31, 2020 at 3:52 AM Newton, congrats for your placement and giving me your lovely feedback on Minichu format. I think you did not attempt any of my previous contests yet you got it on target. Best. Mohan. Mohan Chutani October 31, 2020 at 5:24 AM I am sorry Newton for not being able to recall offhand that you did participate with winning entries earlier too. Thankyou for correcting me there. Best wishes again. Mohan Newton Ranaweera October 31, 2020 at 4:59 AM Thank you so much, Mohan, for the great comment!! In another note, I did participate in both your previous contests on Minichu and had placements in both occasions. Thank you again for conducting the Minichu writing contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2020 at 1:25 AM - A tasty poem, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 20, 2020 at 6:32 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!