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Minichu on Dilemma

A promised better days, Now discombobulated balls of emotions Cold pain lays! Stop new heartbeat, Or make my wife's heart pump instead Hard seat! A bridge, Both hot chaos Ridge! A promised better days, Or make my wife's heart pump instead Ridge!

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Date: 7/24/2024 2:03:00 AM
You did very well, Tonye. This is a complicated and difficult contest. Best for a win.
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Tonye George
Date: 7/28/2024 7:57:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor. I appreciate.
Date: 7/18/2024 2:33:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Tonye George
Date: 7/18/2024 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Sara. I appreciate.
Date: 7/17/2024 6:51:00 AM
Great effort for a very challenging form, the rhyme scheme especially (b), (b), (b). Theme chosen keeps my interest, Tonye. Once I figured it out, I fell in love with Minichu's, like crypto puzzles, bol!
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Tonye George
Date: 7/18/2024 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Anaya. I hope on challenging forms, once in a red moon.. haha.
Date: 7/17/2024 5:27:00 AM
I find this form so challenging and so I have never attempted a Minichu. But you have done it with such ease and mastery. Great entry. All the Best, dear Tonye.
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Date: 7/18/2024 7:27:00 AM
It was really challenging. But don't we like challenges sometimes? Haha. I just had to try dear V. Thank you for your support.
Date: 7/16/2024 4:14:00 PM
This is a difficult limiting form. I appreciate your effort with it.
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Tonye George
Date: 7/17/2024 1:57:00 AM
I really did try. Thank you Andrea.
Date: 7/15/2024 2:32:00 PM
Nicely done.. I cant say it is a form I like very much to be honest, but I can feel the theme in your words.. Nice rhymes and flow to it.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Tonye George
Date: 7/17/2024 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Silent. Never tried it before. It was fun having to do it.
Date: 7/15/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear tonye, its nice to see you try this form minichu, and youv also used beautiful rhymes. I love the way youv depicted pain and how it lays as well as emotions! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest
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Tonye George
Date: 7/17/2024 1:59:00 AM
Thank you Dear Ink. I just wanted to see what I could bring out with that form.
Date: 7/14/2024 10:19:00 PM
enjoyed the study of mild conflict using crisp, flowing language!
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Tonye George
Date: 7/17/2024 1:59:00 AM
Yeàh! Thank you Nette.

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