MINICHU - MAGIC


Lustrous eyes bewitch me As if a spell of gratifying love is cast I can't flee I have no hold And control over my actions Untold To take Counter steps to Break Lustrous eyes bewitch me And control over my actions Break
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Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Lustrous eyes can be dangerous Farookh. ;) A great magical entry. Congratulations! :)
Farookh Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Hahaha... I had already experienced the hold they had. Lol Thank you, Linda, for the warning. Many blessings to you.
Chutani Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Farookh, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan
Farookh Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:36 AM
Thank you, Mohan, for the placement. Much obliged. God bless.
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