Mini Vacation

MINI VACATION

sweetness of four days
off in a row

to pitter, to dream, to combat
the clutter and dust, even the walls

how have i missed that? to dream
on paper with dot to dots, morse

code – oh, help-me-not!  so relaxed
like a mini vacation 24/7 – no rush

the slow grind of coffee beans –
taking moment to filter the smell through

my nose, the ah and ah, having time
on my side. the interlude of grands

their giggle girl laughs, rolling eyes,
oh – their sweet hugs, i can’t buy

and the birthday of a g-son too far
away – hope he had fun, a good one!

a lone pink cloud comes into sight
brimming at the window’s corner,

more of pink and lavender, like
eyelid shades. it’ going to be a pretty day,

my last day before work calls my name.
the wall of books surround me, poetry

of course – Langston Hughes, Carl Sandburg;
Unsinkable and even Little House On The Prairie

and first season of Downton Abbey – lotsa
chattering in that one (missing Poldark)

and just a scintilla of news, only a tiny bit
ah, yes, a vacation of sorts. and the best part –

visiting my folks, a day trip – asking my dad
questions that prompt his eyes to light up.

and to inundate me with so many details –
of water holes near the tracks, of Bethel Island,

of not eating ever, as he recalls in his childhood
memory sleepy state.  a movie with mom.

perhaps an Oscar for LaLa Land. two great
big hugs as i leave.  i needed this week!

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 27, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Oh, this is simply a wonderful and delightful poem, filled with all these big and little things you want to fit in far too few days :)
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January 27, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Darren! Such is life! :)
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January 27, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Sounds like you had a fantastic mini vacation, I can't wait to hear the report from a big vacation. :) Really fun to read Kim, an insightful and well written poem.
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January 27, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thanks, Chris! :)
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