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Mine Last Breath Only With You

The world was on fire, no one could save me but you - Chris Isaak - Wicked Game
All I ask of you, is to stand firm by me. Please. It's all I desire, while the world's on fire. Remain in my life, feel the fatigue shatter. Dance with me on clouds that began to gather. I want to wake in the dawn full of laughter. I know I love you, no one else could save me. Just don't want our love to slip through another. Away in a storm path in spent in slumber. If These be our last hours, mine last breath only with you. A woman in love with the fire that only you can ignite; never leaving me lonely. You make me happy even when I'm broken, stumble and fall with just your words unspoken. Into a world on fire, no one can save me. No longer will I conceal my heart that swell with pride and love my soul infinitely dwells. If These be our last hours, mine last breath only with you. Forever love, no one can save me, but you. Say you love me again. Don't let it go through, vanish, and gaze off, utter shadow of tears. Don't quietly slip out, to leave me alone shattered. I love you more than you'll ever know. You promised your life on a sea of blue sky. Dance me to your heart of breathless umber sigh. Dance me to end of forever mid the trees. Let's leave this world behind on the scented breeze. If These be our last hours, mine last breath only with you. 2/10/2020
4. The world was on fire, no one could save me but you - Chris Isaak - Wicked Game Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 1/29/2021 8:12:00 AM
Truly lovely, Eve ~
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Date: 2/23/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve..
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Date: 2/23/2020 7:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2020 6:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem that has won twice now.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/14/2020 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Eve. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 2/12/2020 11:35:00 PM
Eve, excellent write about the fire of passion, desire, and romance. Great line - "A woman in love with the fire that only you can ignite". Congrats on #1 ~ John
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Date: 2/12/2020 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your line,"Dance with me on clouds that began to gather." It was your pen/ink dancing across to make this one special. Have a good day......
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Date: 2/12/2020 1:37:00 PM
I sense there is just as much feeling that has gone into your work here than went into Chris' original song. Well done on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2020 10:13:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your win! Very well done. David
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Date: 2/12/2020 8:54:00 AM
WoW! Eve, You’ve penned a good entry for the contest theme. You conveyed “ The world was on fire, no one could save but you” very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/12/2020 6:41:00 AM
Brilliantly composed Eve, congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 2/11/2020 9:21:00 PM
You set the page on fire with this write Eve, Well penned..
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Date: 2/11/2020 8:53:00 PM
Wow Eve, your words are on fire, and your poetry is smoking. I love it, winning wishes and hugs for the night.xo
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:58:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on a winning poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:56:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on a winning poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:24:00 PM
what an amazing write Eve... congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest....
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:17:00 AM
Amazing, unexpected rhymes here, especially love 'feel the fatigue shatter' - so full of passion, Eve!
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:24:00 AM
Your last two lines are interesting...made me wonder...
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Date: 2/11/2020 7:02:00 AM
Beautifully done Eve. You write love poetry so well. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 2/11/2020 5:53:00 AM
This is fantastic, Eve. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Charlie x
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:30:00 AM
Love there is as savior where you are only mine! great loving poem
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:12:00 AM
The repeating lines made it beautiful.. Wonderful love poem... Great entry in the contest Eve.. Good luck..
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