mine heavy thund'er

.
                poor         peanut
                       pretty
            sheets crumple'd
                     in       mitts
                        hern 
                    reach'n fer 
                 thuh       board
                        head
                      shake'n

                      "please"  

         (((just))) make thuh
                          bed
              i'm not allow'd tuh
                  phuk      maid
                          thuh
                          not on fridayz
                                              tip (edvard            tap)
                                                                 meanz
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