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Mine Eyes Lied

Looking out the kitchen window
What is that mine eyes see
Pale Pink Running Rosebud looking at me
Let me look close at a miracle spied
Oh! White bleached dead leaf 
How mine eyes have lied

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Billy Mcpherson Jr. Date: 2/6/2011 2:50:00 PM I loved this poem, beautiful imagery. Nice work. Thanks for your comment on "Heartbeat in the Night" by the way. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/23/2011 7:15:00 AM So well written, Sara, enjoyed the read! And thank you for your ongoing kind comments...Have a great week!...Gert Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 1/23/2011 6:35:00 AM Yes well now this is lovely for sure as well as a surprise within a prize. Wonderful job Sara. really like this one. Into my favs Login to Reply

Tiffany Mccall Date: 1/22/2011 10:31:00 PM thanks for the comment enjoyed your poem and wish to see more Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/21/2011 7:12:00 PM Quite a take on your visual Sara. Beautiful Job, Sis. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/21/2011 11:49:00 AM great piece sara i really like the way you have portrayed the fallability of human senses that can happen, and you have made a poem from that! so we find the bleached leaf has had a use indeed. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/21/2011 1:31:00 AM the way you ended this was a blast for me, sara!! so original.. i like, like!!:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/20/2011 1:27:00 PM A fine memory though. Methinks you yearn for spring. Enjoyed this one. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Carole Cookie Arnold Date: 1/20/2011 11:15:00 AM Amazing portrayl of how imagery stirs a different response in every mind Creating descriptions of colors and emotions etc. At times giving us a vision of what is yet to birth even from the frail white leaf Love Cookie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/20/2011 6:45:00 AM thankxx Sara for your special comments today on my poetry Vast View... also just posted The Light u might enjoy my friend.. hope all is wonderful.. your time to shine luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/19/2011 2:41:00 PM Things are not always what they seem to be. My eyesight's not as good as it once was, Sara, and I probably would have thought it was a rosebud as well. Enjoyed the humor in your poem! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/19/2011 2:21:00 PM Makes me wish for spring also Sara. beautiful scene you painted...love Michael Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/19/2011 9:36:00 AM Cute one...and nature's illusions can be so entertaining...if we have a great imagination. I enjoyed a smile when I read this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/19/2011 7:19:00 AM lovely to read such an interesting poem, great imagery aspect. Harry Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/19/2011 6:07:00 AM We are all looking out to see if we can see a sign or two of Spring or flower ..Sara.. nicely penned my friend.. giving us a breath of fresh air on Soup today .. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/19/2011 5:36:00 AM This is just so wonderful, you captured a moment, well done, just beautiful and regarding your comment about the death of my Peanut cat, thanks so much, it was hard yesterday, I will tell you that and like you said of your dog telling you, she told me,"it was time" how we love our pets~~ Login to Reply