Mine Eyes Lied

I loved this poem, beautiful imagery. Nice work. Thanks for your comment on "Heartbeat in the Night" by the way.

So well written, Sara, enjoyed the read! And thank you for your ongoing kind comments...Have a great week!...Gert

Yes well now this is lovely for sure as well as a surprise within a prize. Wonderful job Sara. really like this one. Into my favs

thanks for the comment enjoyed your poem and wish to see more

Quite a take on your visual Sara. Beautiful Job, Sis. Agape, Moses

great piece sara i really like the way you have portrayed the fallability of human senses that can happen, and you have made a poem from that! so we find the bleached leaf has had a use indeed.

the way you ended this was a blast for me, sara!! so original.. i like, like!!:) huggs, nette

A fine memory though. Methinks you yearn for spring. Enjoyed this one. Love, Dave

Amazing portrayl of how imagery stirs a different response in every mind Creating descriptions of colors and emotions etc. At times giving us a vision of what is yet to birth even from the frail white leaf Love Cookie

thankxx Sara for your special comments today on my poetry Vast View... also just posted The Light u might enjoy my friend.. hope all is wonderful.. your time to shine luv..

Things are not always what they seem to be. My eyesight's not as good as it once was, Sara, and I probably would have thought it was a rosebud as well. Enjoyed the humor in your poem! Love, Carolyn

Makes me wish for spring also Sara. beautiful scene you painted...love Michael

Cute one...and nature's illusions can be so entertaining...if we have a great imagination. I enjoyed a smile when I read this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann

lovely to read such an interesting poem, great imagery aspect. Harry

We are all looking out to see if we can see a sign or two of Spring or flower ..Sara.. nicely penned my friend.. giving us a breath of fresh air on Soup today ..

This is just so wonderful, you captured a moment, well done, just beautiful and regarding your comment about the death of my Peanut cat, thanks so much, it was hard yesterday, I will tell you that and like you said of your dog telling you, she told me,"it was time" how we love our pets~~