Mine, But For How Long?

How you wait for me 
                    I love how you treat me
                   You make me feel comfortable
                  You hug me first thing in the morning                                                        
               Then you entertain me all the way to work,               
   I trust you so much, knowing you’ll shout if you get too much attention
  I don’t mind all the guys admiring you, lets be honest, that why were together
 Your curves are gorgeous, the lovely tan you display. You take me to great places.
I want us to be together forever, but you know as well as me, one day I’ll be trading you in.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 4, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Clever poem Gareth, nice one >> James
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April 2, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Very cute shape poem, James. At first I thought I was reading about a woman, but of course then I scrolled down to read the rest and saw "the big picture." Great fun to read! Love, Carolyn
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