Makoto Ogino Poet Sonnet

Mindtraveller - 4 Episode-1 Maria 2

Deep Unconscious is borderless world,
Full of image and things of symbolics,
None of emotion and things of logics,
By one's sense, they're rebuilt as virtual world.

Maria knows, things are meaningless in unconscious,
All goods and evils are decided by human,
And it's sense of value, influenced thought of human,
She keeps her mentality, always be auspicious.

Deeper and deeper, in unconscious diving,
Something appeared drifting in the stream,
Seemed like islets, like rootless wanderer.

Named "Mind Gateway" , known as base of surviving,
It was a portal to the individual's dream,
Maria landed onto one, starting task as renderer.

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Olatubosun David September 25, 2020 at 1:47 AM Great as usual Makoto Ogino September 25, 2020 at 3:29 AM Dear Olatubosun David, Thank you for your visiting!

Silent One February 13, 2018 at 5:27 AM Great poem Makoto, but this is a sonnet.. A sonnet has 14 lines.. Makoto Ogino September 25, 2020 at 2:47 AM Sorry for long silense. And thanks for your comment. Yes, I know it's a sonnet, but I love writing sonnet so that I'd like to write this series as sonnets.