Mind's Intentions

A place of past, present and future plot
I consider this a crucible that is ever hot,
building bursting bubbles of billion thought
they come and go whizzing in this whirlpool pot,
outside events can evoke turmoil in this spot
to make one run like wild unbridled horses lost,
remember serenity and stillness must be caught
only then can one climb greater heights sought
in mind’s intentions it starts to shape us into a fine lot.



9-Mar-2018
Eight Word Challenge - 24 lines maximum - Poetry Contest
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Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Sathya , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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March 15, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem.
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sathya - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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March 14, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Congrats, Sathya, on your thoughtful piece. regards, Viv
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March 14, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Well done, Sathya. Congrats on your placement.
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