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Mind's Intentions

A place of past, present and future plot I consider this a crucible that is ever hot, building bursting bubbles of billion thought they come and go whizzing in this whirlpool pot, outside events can evoke turmoil in this spot to make one run like wild unbridled horses lost, remember serenity and stillness must be caught only then can one climb greater heights sought in mind’s intentions it starts to shape us into a fine lot. 9-Mar-2018 Eight Word Challenge - 24 lines maximum - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert Haigh

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Date: 3/15/2018 9:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Sathya , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/15/2018 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:55:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sathya - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:19:00 PM
Congrats, Sathya, on your thoughtful piece. regards, Viv
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:48:00 PM
Well done, Sathya. Congrats on your placement.
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