Minds Eye Can See Vision Comp

Through the corridors of time you travel 
Just a gorgeous twinkle in a tenuous universe
So surreal to see you trip in my minds eye 
Twirling into view like a dirvish of arcane times
Chanting in a Murmurous whisper incantations
then with a sonorous thunder clap she's gone 
my very own tinker bell as turned to dust
she was more than any grown up's eye can see.     


26052016 comp entry
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Roper Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Stephen, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Pennell  Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 11:23 AM
cheers eve
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:56 AM
very well written Stephen the first line sets an awesome tone for the rest of the poem....congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Pennell  Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:56 AM
many thanks laura loo
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