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Mind's Ebb Tide

Wading Pants rolled to the knees A soft enduring sunset greets my eyes I ponder the meaning Love, life, happiness Where has time gone? Where is it going? Wet My pants now bare weight Still watching the sunset’s colors change As your eyes drift to see Mine already staring at yours All my questions are answered Time went, with happiness Time goes, with anticipation Life could not be better For it has love and happiness Wanting Never anything more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/14/2009 2:10:00 PM
Michael -AW There is nothing more powerful than love and being loved! Lovely poem! Happy Valentines day! Laura :)
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Date: 2/13/2009 8:55:00 PM
great imagery... life is a constant motion of adjustments...........great write
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Date: 2/13/2009 5:07:00 PM
This write is so romantic, perfect for Valentines Day....always, Christy
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:24:00 PM
What a lovely write, Michael! Great imagery and deep emotion perfectly mingled into this poem that leaves me with such a good feeling. Contented. Beautiful, Michael. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/13/2009 10:57:00 AM
great free verse.....nicely done
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Date: 2/13/2009 10:18:00 AM
Michael, great use of imagery! This is one of my favorites! Carolyn
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