Mind's Brittle Jars

Closed jars of crystal mind nesting our emotions butterflies of many colours colours of joy,sorrow,love,hate and more those jars are more fragile than glass handle them with much care if once broken it's gone! Date:24th January,2012
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Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:22 AM
jashi.. thanks for coming around as i always look forward to your comments... re " adolescent stems, i am thinking of entering this for debbie's transformation gig.. you thnk??:) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 9:36 AM
are you there??.. come visit and spin a new one, kashi buddy!..:) huggs
Minardi Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:21 AM
If once broken, it's gone.. nothing to replace it! great thought, Kash. :)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 12:03 PM
I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Kash. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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January 26, 2012 at 7:18 PM
wonderful! but i work to achieve that goal though, breaking jars! ^.~
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 5:18 PM
Hello again, still waiting for your next poem!!
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 8:51 AM
you gotta give my kashi-poetic dose today or i can;t SLEEEP!... got more??.. congrats on your wins and thanks for your concern, buddy... :) huggs
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January 25, 2012 at 10:15 PM
That is very good and so true- bless you, bren: )
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Hey, kash, you must have gone offline. Anyway, I"m outta here for the rest of the night now. I need to work on a love senryu! SEe ya!
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 10:23 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Kash. Love, Carol
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January 25, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Very descriptive rictameter Kash. I don't want those jars to get broken either.
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 11:39 PM
VERY nice imagery and analogy to life. Susan was wanting a metaphorical poem and YOU delivered my friend. Good night now. I think I will not post a poem tonight. I won't even have time for comments anyway.(well, maybe late tomorrow.)
Onclaud Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 9:45 PM
this dazzles me, kashi.. another jewel of a remarkable piece with that soft appeal to it.. winning is surefire! :) huggs!.. SOUP MAIL!
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January 24, 2012 at 8:46 PM
How fragile is the mind? Now I have an idea! Love it!! Blessings, Rhonda
Song Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Great write!...So much tho't into this one, Kash. It is wonderful..and yes the mind should be handled with much care. This is why kindness needs to be more valued... Ps..I see you didn't like my newest poem...it is a new form called REVERSE TANKA!!...ha ha..I can't believe I did that..You had me laughing with that note..thanks for pointing out that I can not count to 7 or 5 with lil sleep! YOu are STILL THE EDITOR!! Gwendolen
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