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Mindless Brook

water wanders slipping over and down rocks aimlessly finding its way home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/23/2019 10:38:00 AM
beautiful
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/24/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you P.M., as you've figured out, I'm like the brook, on the path.
Date: 4/9/2018 10:53:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku! Fave :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/10/2018 7:19:00 AM
Maureen, very kind of you. I'm humbled and thankful.
Date: 4/9/2018 8:35:00 PM
Very sweet haiku, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/9/2018 9:45:00 PM
Coming from you and your talents in this area, I'm most appreciative of your remark. Much thanks.