Mindless Brook

water wanders slipping
over and down rocks aimlessly
finding its way home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marc Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 10:38 AM
beautiful
Gaul Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Thank you P.M., as you've figured out, I'm like the brook, on the path.
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April 9, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Wonderful Haiku! Fave :)
Gaul Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Maureen, very kind of you. I'm humbled and thankful.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Very sweet haiku, Greg.
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April 9, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Coming from you and your talents in this area, I'm most appreciative of your remark. Much thanks.
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