Mindful Places

Bounties advance spring has sprawled
Silvery gray skies with powder puff clouds
The last decline of winter has since been forgotten 
Sweet calls embark to gather a mate
Reminiscent of yester years 
Blushing seasons whispering a favorite tune 
Golden forsythias now nearly in full bloom 
I remember as a child taking some into my small hand 
I was filled with sheer excitement to delight my Mother 
And I did so 
With teacup parties in my sand box 
And shovels and pails that scooped a tunnel to forever
The familiar smells and comforting sounds 
The lovely red-breasted robins shagging around 
Paging out her goodnight weeps 
As I closed my eyes and drifted off to sleep 
The long awaited wondrous season has begun 
The day ceased with the closing of the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/30/2009 3:41:00 AM
All this time I've been missing the beauty of your words. Your rememberings remind me of my own and you didn't give in until the sun went down. Precious memories for sure.
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:07:00 PM
Memories, such wonderful special memories that are dear to us only. We are the keeper of those memories, and we are the monitor that replays the memories that are fantasized by us only. Wonderful... Wonderful! Love, Sami
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful reflection. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Reminds me of my childhood. Enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:37:00 AM
So lovely.......filled with sweet memory and beautiful images of a peaceful night's sleep after a day in the sun. Wonderful. ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/25/2009 2:51:00 AM
Such wonderful memories - they are a treasure to be held onto forever. beautiful, Laura. and thanks for your support on my card, so much! :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:34:00 PM
You take the reader back to the warm and wonderful days of "teacup parties in my sand box." Such a lovely write, beautifully worded, Laura!
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:27:00 PM
Laura, how delightful to share in this glimpse of your childhood, I'm able to close my eyes and enjoy your delectable poem! Jim
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