Mindful Eye

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Mindfulness shows us the way, self-aware through night and day. Ego urges deflect thought, thus its best, to be self-taught. Exiting game of shadows, we graze in heaven’s meadows. Erst fears and desires renounced, lower mind is here now trounced. Knowing love alone real, fickle cravings lose appeal. That that does not come and go, recognised in stillness slow. Oh hermit, God in-dwells form, felt as bliss magnetism warm. Once cravings of ego shorn, we as twice born, yet live on. 20-March-2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/20/2022 11:13:00 AM

Ever line resonates with my soul. A FAV for me. Write On! my friend, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/20/2022 6:39:00 PM

Bill, I guess this turned out well, showing how the transmutation within may be graced, if we choose to shift. So happy you liked this enough to mark it as a fave!

Sand Blown

Date: 3/20/2022 8:00:00 AM

...a 'mindfull-eye'...to see...well past the fourteenth of a second shadow-perception time of the brain.....good thoughts..... ....stan sand

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/20/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thank you, sand