mind trap

feeling unease the disease thought fear seizes heart

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/5/2024 5:38:00 AM

Dear US, I Love Than-Bauks and yours is one of my favorites. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/5/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thanks Daniel - this is a challenging form for me at least but I use it from time to time to remain poetically alert!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/4/2024 11:05:00 AM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, yes unseeking Seeker fear does size the heart. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2024 8:04:00 AM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, yes silence does set us free. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/4/2024 5:52:00 PM

And silence sets us free