Mind the Paint

Mind the Paint


Oh, to paint the inside of the egg
restyle the matted gray of sunless gloom
splash color on the curtains that belie
soft filtered light through windows of the soul.
Scaffolds to paint the Sistine of the Dome
brushstrokes to taunt the essence of our thought
teasing the tortured remnants of dreams lost
rainbows - revelations of a Master’s touch.

Creation’s palette in fetal fingered grasp
a water colored future dab by dab
a valiant streak of orange in the blue
the glowing red of life’s untarnished thrill.

Wild dance, cerebral choreography,
brushless art upon the eyelids of sleep.



©3/7/2018

submitted to – Mind the wet paint – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Congrats on your placement, John. I love the way you wrapped up your poem.
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:54 PM
such awesome imagery John, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:40 AM
How long you spent on this I've no idea, but the result is great, John. Congrats! Viv
Moorman Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:48 AM
WOW John! What a vividly descriptive rendering. I see why I admire your work. You have a way of showing readers thoughts they could never envision. Thanks, and congratulations on your win.
Gentry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Enjoyed reading. Descriptive and interesting. Good luck in contest.
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