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Mind the Music

mind song riffs* joining the back beat nature clicks timpani** drums of black thunder percuss*** then the sky opens *riff a short series of notes which create a melody **skin covered drums ***to tap on

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:35:00 AM

DEBBIE, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2012 10:09:00 AM

the images come together like a form of music, debbie.. congrats on your win!... thank too for bringing me back to the days when serenading a woman was a fond ritual in the philippines; it's a dying art now... i so appreciate the compliment..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 2:11:00 PM

Creative winning entry..((()))!!!Congrats..Sara

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/28/2012 6:50:00 AM

Boogie on, Cher!...great descriptions..nothing like music to sooth the soul...congrats - Tim

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 8:13:00 PM

A fantastic write, Debbie! I love the musical theme! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/25/2012 10:43:00 AM

It's a precious gem like, few words become enough to pen wonderfully. Loved always, bl

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/24/2012 6:48:00 PM

boom,boom,boom,great write Debbie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2012 10:21:00 PM

wow, great poem once I read the meanings of a few of those words. I had no clue on timpani or percuss! Quite interesting one. Yes, Debs, I was lucky to have had my first kiss from an older "son of a preacher man!!" (like the song almost!)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2012 9:33:00 PM

Hello Debbie, a nice little verse... thank you for sharing,....xox~pd