Mind Over Under Matter

the sum of our parts the brain the calculator ~ fallible the fall

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2023 7:45:00 PM

My brain is no calculator (in math terms anyway) as it is more a library card~

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/9/2023 5:37:00 AM

Giggles, same same! ;),

Bill Baker

Date: 9/6/2023 5:04:00 PM

Intriguing Senryu, Maureen, thanks for sharing it with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/7/2023 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Bill! We so often over under estimate our brains ;), blessings to you! xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/6/2023 2:15:00 PM

That injury still giving you trouble Super Mo, but you haven’t lost depth in words, fallible indeed is the fall, sometimes even with a helmet on, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/6/2023 4:19:00 PM

Helmets work! While they don’t prevent concussions I doubt I’d be here if I wasn’t wearing one… bicycle vs 2 cars. One thing the experience has taught me is to question my brain. Don’t believe everything you think! ;) ty D, xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2023 5:53:00 AM

I think it’s more likely that you will fly. Blessings Rick. ;0)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/6/2023 8:57:00 AM

And that’s without drugs! ;), Thank you dear poet. ;),

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/4/2023 9:41:00 AM

I can hear your brain ticking all the way from here Maureen. Hugs

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/5/2023 5:51:00 AM

Ticking like a time bomb ;), It’s nice to be appreciated, thank you! xomo