Mind Over Under Matter

the sum of our parts
 the brain the calculator ~ 

       fallible the fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Faulkner Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:45 PM
My brain is no calculator (in math terms anyway) as it is more a library card~
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Giggles, same same! ;),
Baker Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Intriguing Senryu, Maureen, thanks for sharing it with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Bill! We so often over under estimate our brains ;), blessings to you! xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:15 PM
That injury still giving you trouble Super Mo, but you haven’t lost depth in words, fallible indeed is the fall, sometimes even with a helmet on, cheers David
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Helmets work! While they don’t prevent concussions I doubt I’d be here if I wasn’t wearing one… bicycle vs 2 cars. One thing the experience has taught me is to question my brain. Don’t believe everything you think! ;) ty D, xomo!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:53 AM
I think it’s more likely that you will fly. Blessings Rick. ;0)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:57 AM
And that’s without drugs! ;), Thank you dear poet. ;),
Connelly Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:41 AM
I can hear your brain ticking all the way from here Maureen. Hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Ticking like a time bomb ;), It’s nice to be appreciated, thank you! xomo
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