Mind Over Matter

mind over matter
challenging one's potential
~ stars unlimited



AP: 2nd place 2026

Submitted on January 27, 2020 for contest SENRYU ON MIND sponsored by JENISH SOMADAS  -  RANKED 2ND
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Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:09 AM
- Congratulations, Line :) - Enjoy reading it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:32 PM
REALLY well done, Line!! I really like yours.
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:02 AM
awesome lovely lady- deserved higher placement in my opinion. there's just something about the "stars unlimited" that catches my breath. You are amazing at haiku and senryu. Congrats, be blessed x:-)
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Thank you so much, Lu Loo. Most appreciated.
Somadas Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 12:47 AM
Thank you for participating in the contest with your wonderful Senryu Line.. I'm honoured..
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Thanks for sponsoring this fun contest, Jenish.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 12:45 AM
Congratulations on your placement, Line. So true, dreams are unlimited.
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Thanks, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Love that third line. Shoot for those stars! Wonderfully penned, Line! :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 11:20 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 11:29 AM
A gorgeous write for this contest Line
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Thanks Caren. Much appreciated.
Adams Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 10:31 AM
I like this one...if one doesn't reach for the stars they will never know their ability :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Woodrow Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 10:13 AM
very nice! :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Thanks, Susan.
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