Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Free verse

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Contest:  AI: Panacea or Pain?

Sponsor: Simon Rogerson

Date: 25-08-2025

( not against technology but against misusing it )

 

Mind or Machine?

God’s creation dispenses comforts. 
Many of man’s creation deliver frets.
AI, the weapon of the wisest, 
Adds no more cognizance to the existing.
Don’t assume it a dumb servant.
It will take us under its authority.
There will be a pandemonium as 
The reality would go under the covers of falsity.
One day, the whole world will seek a philosopher's help
Ethics, values, and logics of life will be the new lessons. 
Creation of technology is all right.
Let it not be a cremation of human threads.

Place: 1st

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David Drowley September 9, 2025 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win! You get the picture. Patri Venkata Ramana September 15, 2025 at 6:25 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Reason A. Poteet September 9, 2025 at 8:33 AM I agree; change is good (inevitable); choices are getting better (improving) but Christ remains the best (immutable). Artificial is an excellent descriptive term for intelligence making promises (for some) to be the new god of culture change. What will be, will be. Patri Venkata Ramana September 15, 2025 at 6:25 AM Thank you so much for reading my lines

Simon Rogerson September 9, 2025 at 7:09 AM Hi Patri Many congratulations on winning my AI poetry contest. Your poem raised key warnings without a hint of AI aversion. I head off to Lisbon next week and will be using your poem (fully accredited of course) at the international conference (ETHICOMP2025) I am involved in. Best wishes Simon Patri Venkata Ramana September 9, 2025 at 11:29 PM Dear Poet, Thank you so much for the compliments. It makes me happy to know that you are taking my verse to the international conference that you are involved in. What else can a poet expect? I'm grateful to you for this. My best wishes to you for the conference!